Many pelple always ask “what time is it now?” and if that person don’t have any watch so they can’s answer the question. So we have to had a watch . After look to the ad in magazine “BLANCPIN” watch I feel notting, the way they show the watch, using words, and the design og the watch. It can’t make me interest in that wath, maybe it can make other who interested in blandname watch.
The watch ad’s they show how beautiful the watch is and what it can do. In the ad’s they put the gold watch in back blackground to male the gold watch look conspicuous when pekpke look at it and hey had use some nice word in the ad, to make them want to won this watch.
The new design of watch normal but look nice and it can tell date, month and time also. They use the word to when the comsumer read it and they want to buy i. the innovation of the perpetual calendar has always been a challenge to watch maker. The “villeret perpetual calendar ” has managed to master this with Blancpain’s patented correctors under the lugs. A techbical perfetion in craftsmanship and aestheics from the manufactory in Le Brassus.
But in ths ad they didn’t show the picture when people wearing the watch or tell the size of the watch, so we can’t know how is it when this watch on our hand. They have some mpore picture of someone wear this watch, persenter also importan to sell the watch.
the watch ad can make people who interested in watch because the watch are new design of the year and there are bland name, all information and he picture can see the watch properly. the ads can be improve by putting the picture that people come up with the watch so we can see how beautiful there are.
- didn't you correct the mistakes in your draft? Why are they still here?
ReplyDelete-you didn't mention the propaganda devices used to play up the positive aspect of the ad
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