Sunday, December 12, 2010

Complain Letter

Eun Ji LeeRoom 126 SP Mansion Apartment
362/2 Soi Soonvijai 4 Rama 9
Bangkapi Huaykwang Bangkok
10320 Thailand
November 25, 2010

Dr. Roxy
Principal, Niva International School
Bangkok Thailand 10240

Dear Dr. Roxy:

 On November 22, 2010 I really needed the toilet and i quickly entered the girl's toilet on second floor. Sadly the toilet was full and also the girl's toilet on third floor. So I and other 3 people have to comeback to the classroom without using the toilet.

 i found that this event happens  often when students are using the toilet as their changing room for their P.E classes. Therefore other students who need toilet could not use the toilet, and have to go to the toilet during class times.

It would be better if you could provide more toilets or make changing rooms for P.E students in the new building. I would like the problem to be solved by January 31, 2011. If you need any additional information please contact me at 081-234-5678.

I appreciate your concern on this matter.

Sincerely,













Eun Ji Lee
Grade 11 

1 comment:

  1. - problems on punctuation and grammar
    - Saying "I would like the problem to be solved" sound too bossy, be more diplomatic by saying whether it's possible to have the problem solved by the said date. Avoid using "I"

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